Renwick Students' page

by Arwen.

Have you seen the A-amazing writing of team 1 yet?

Read on to find out the before and after “when you put ice in the sun”, how cool the sun is and about the horrific Mr and Mrs Twit.

Room 3

The cold ice was shiny before we put it in the hot sun and when put in the hot sun the cold dribble did melt.

by Georgette.

I am the sun. I am the hot shiny ball of gas and fire with fire and lava coming out of me.

by Zara.

Room 6

The Twits

Once upon a time there lived two grubby people called Mr and Mrs Twit. They lived in a deep, brick, slimy house. Despite having no windows at all, it had a spiky garden that had stinging nettles and an old tree with really sticky glue so they could have bird pie.

Hideous, evil, crooked Mr Twit was as vicious as a witch doing horrible tricks on creepy Mrs Twit.  

Brainless Mr Twit has evil food in his spiky beard because Mr Twit never minds; if he opens his mouth, he just licks around his beard and finds food in sneaky places.

By Charlotte F. 

Wow what quality writing!